So what...
(Screw iambic pentameter and rhyme... sometimes words don't fit. Doesn't make them any less true.)
Fire burning in empty eyes,
rage and hate and bitter lies,
yearning for the happy times
a single soul cries out.
Laced and caged and bound to shadow
she sits and waits for silence to follow
the days and nights, all far too long
shatter past, and then they're gone.
gone
like lights put out in fallow dawn.
Never sown with motivation
never leaving the sordid station
she's there,
where she'll always be
because she's forgotten something ever so simple:
How to breath.
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Actually very beautiful. But breathing is the start, then keep doing it since it is yours to do.
J.