Ok this is a small piece of a story I am writting. I need others opinions to see how it flows.


I am going to shower. That kid may of been small but he seemed pretty heavy by the end of our hike back. My back is aching and my legs feel like rubber. If you want to start the grill when I get out Ill grill us up some steaks. I got up and left Sandy on the couch. Just as I had thought nothing felt better on my aching back than the hot water from the shower. Out of the corner of my eye I notice Im not alone in the bathroom. Through the steam on the shower door I see Sandy getting undressed. As she walks toward me I open the shower door. Sandy looks at me with a shy uneasy smile. I reach out for her hand and guide her in. She reaches up and feels the soap in my short hair. I put my head back under the water and let her rinse it out. I could feel her eyes on my body was her hands worked away at my hair. I stayed under the water longer than I needed to. Finally I grabbed her hands and brought them down to her sides. I slide my hands up her body until I was cupping her face in mine and kissed her softly. I had never heard the sweet sound that came out of her mouth before. I wrapped my arms her body as we kissed under the spray of the shower. Finally I broke off the kiss and came up for air. Sandys eyes were dark with a desire I had never seen before. She was looking at me with a look mixed of begging for me to succumb to her desires and a look of deep fear.