Who Will Catch Me?
Tired Dont want to fightNumbCant feel Life falling apart.Falling face firstWho will catch me before i hit the ground? Not use the "feelings" quite yet.I look in the mirror and want to punch the reflection.Who will be there when I hit the ground?I wish I could quit.But im a fighterWhat if the Fighter gives up?Then what?Who will catch the Fighter when she hits the ground?
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God can!
good poem, feel intensity.
we should all be fighters and refuse to hit the ground without dignity, even if no one is there to catch. keep going
This seems to start off with you being tired and not wanting to fight. Then you start getting angry (punching the reflection) and finally you decide that, yes, you ARE a fighter. But you\'d still like to have someone there to watch your back through it all. The \"great\" Arnold Schwarzennegger had a quote that I like to cite from the \"Terminator\" movie. He said that anger is much more useful than despair. I agree with this and your poem seems to come to that conclusion as well. Nice job.
beautiful!! you are very talented. thanks for sharing with me. Annalee
there wil always be someone there to catch you or pick you up. That is why we all have to develop a support system made up of drs. therapists, all kinds of friends and of course your angels. You are just going into the deeper places of your soul and lots is coming out. By expressing it you are facing it. And one faced and dealt with the fears and worries go away. You are doing great hon
Not use to Feelings, OMG that is a mouthful, in itself. That was really awesome, you just do not know how much strength I find when I read your poems, you know what I was going thru, and I came to your poems and it gave me the strenght to face what it was that I was going thru, and that in itself was a miricle to me. I am one that believes that you have a VERY SPECIAL GOD and that HE IS ALWAYS GOING TO BE THERE TO CATCH IF YOU EVER DO FALL. Girl, I cannot tell you how much STRENGHT, I have gotten from you. To me your a blessing from Heaven and love you so dearly. I am sorry I have not wriiten in your journals, am having to learn so many things all over again, since the car wreck but I am so lucky because even tho I am fifty, I am still here to be of service. Thank you so very much for tell me about the new poem, I do not always remember. Please let me know when you write one, I am sorry, I am having to learn DS all over again and even how to use it. I love you so Dearly and am here for you ANYTIME YOU NEED ME. Love Kacey or Kase@DS. ( HUGS )