SNEAK PREVIEW of story ima publish....
this is what is going to be on the back of the cover, when i get published...feel free to comment and give constructive critism
A world of unknown, where two teenagers struggle to find themselves in the world. They struggle with reality, feelings, emotions, pain, tears, and stumble across a life they never knew existed. But is this life what they want? Is this life, something they choose for eternity? They realize, it’s not what they want, not the life they desire. But how do they get home? Where will this life take them? Will it bring them back to reality? As they fight to gain control, slowly they lose it… but do they regain control? Or do they fall into the deep dark world where it all may end…?
A world of unknown, where two teenagers struggle to find themselves in the world. They struggle with reality, feelings, emotions, pain, tears, and stumble across a life they never knew existed. But is this life what they want? Is this life, something they choose for eternity? They realize, it’s not what they want, not the life they desire. But how do they get home? Where will this life take them? Will it bring them back to reality? As they fight to gain control, slowly they lose it… but do they regain control? Or do they fall into the deep dark world where it all may end…?
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Sounds like the first day of High School. ;-) teasing...
It is a good teaser. I would open the book to read a page or two.
A world of unnknown........but don\'t say world again in the same sentence.
Apart from that I love it !!!
One n sorry