Of Cabbages and Kings - Chapter 1

I posted the first chapter of my book on Alphonsus's Written Word. I've pretty much gone through all of the suggestions asked of me in my "Story Teller" post. I'm debating either asking for more suggestions, starting to write on some of the topics from Inksters or some other group (I don't like the 500 word limit though), or just sitting back and focusing on my book. I'm still up in the air on this, so I'll let y'all know. Love,Steve / Alphonsus