low-poem
low
may 15 2012
can you let me go
just let me go away
i cant just show
you the path, the way
to get out of here
theres no simple path
i feel like ive been stabbed with a sphere
and bathing in a blood bath
dont know where i should go
or what i should do
theres no way to show
you that im not getting through
id like to say goodbye
but im to scared to let go
so instead im going to say hi
and stay, in this world, with this low.
not going any where
not any time soon
im sitting right there
looking into the moon
for another day
just a bunch more to come around
with nothing to say
and with no sound.
may 15 2012
can you let me go
just let me go away
i cant just show
you the path, the way
to get out of here
theres no simple path
i feel like ive been stabbed with a sphere
and bathing in a blood bath
dont know where i should go
or what i should do
theres no way to show
you that im not getting through
id like to say goodbye
but im to scared to let go
so instead im going to say hi
and stay, in this world, with this low.
not going any where
not any time soon
im sitting right there
looking into the moon
for another day
just a bunch more to come around
with nothing to say
and with no sound.
Replies
awww that breaks my heart, very good at the same time....you know what i mean.
yes i know what you mean. its just speaking from heart tho
I like that you said you want to say goodbye but instead you will stay hi and stay in this world - I feel the same way sometimes
thanks. so true
Your poems show what you are feeling, and they are artistic! I love them, solo!!!
thank you! i write what i feel often