Lost
I’m lost, I’m lonely, I’m broken, I’m badI’m missing in action, alone and so sadNo one can see me, am I even realSo what if I’m not, it’s not a big dealI’m demanding, I’m needy, I’m worthless and stillI long to be loved, to be belong if you willI’m at war with my thoughts and all that I knewI question who I was, who I am, what I do I move in slow motion, while the world rushes byNo one has time for the tears that I cryI don’t know where to direct all my painSo I punish myself again and againI didn’t ask for this life, I don’t want to be meI want to go back, oh please set me freeNo more can be said, no more can be doneAt the end of it all, I’m lost and they’ve won
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so moving made me want to cry cant remeber the last time i cried
This is so wonderful and your a great poet as well. We all feel this way at times in our life, and we shouldn\'t really. Its just that life it self makes us feel worthless and that noe one can see us. But the Lord sees us all the time, were never alone as long as you believe in him. Hope your feeling better now. Flutter
You have so eloquently put into words how I\'ve felt several times in my life. So please know that you are not alone. You are in my prayers.
My dearest friend. Im never going to let you be a nobody. You mean so much to people, you dont give yourself the credit you deserve. Youre truly a gifted and amazing person. I know I frustrate you many times, I frustrate myself. But I wish you would let people in even if it was people who are being paid to be there to offer a service. I agree with everyone above. That poem was simply brilliant and had me in tears. But Ill never let you go and you will always be MY BEST FRIEND