Yesterday on the bus on the way to work, I started crying and felt rejected and alone. I had paper and wrote these lyrics. On a bus trying to pay the bills trying hard to get the right pillsLife feels like just the upside of a hillKeep saying it will be ok. Loneliness hugs me like a cold blankettry to stay warm but I can't seem to shake itNot so proud of me but I know how to fake itKeep saying life will be just fine Rejection recieved every time I blinkNothing to offer to anyone but what I thinkTry steadying my nerves as I feel myself sinkstart asking "life will turn out, right?" Guilt is building to a cumbersome finaleCresendoing to a very heavy endingRestless and aching I feel no connectionsStart feeling somethings not right More will come to this song later but that's it for now.
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You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself with the song lyrics. Do you also write the music??
You are not alone in your feelings--there are many of us who feel the same way. Best of life, love and luck to you. Nana
This proves that it\'s all about the ability to express the heart.Self-expression.
How can we tell others about the places inside us if we ain\'t been to them ?
Peace bro
ouch, yeah x
Wow Chugger that was so nice. I hope today finds you in a better place (oops it 12:55 so it\'s not the next day yet)...
You really understand imagry and how to let someone else \'hear\' your pain. Thanks for sharing.
peace, teresa
You express yourself very well. I hope today is better for you.
Have you ever thought about doing something with your music? It was really beautiful and I really identified with it... your imagery is so clear and beatiful.
Great Expression. If you do write the music record it put it on you tube so we can all listen!!!
yes..wut they said..Nice.Its your gift!! very nice. :):)Debe
heh its me. lol
P.s i rated
You\'re amazing Chugger, those lyrics are so soulful,really got me, right to the core of my being.sleep peacefully tonight,and acknowledge the gift you have, it\'s astounding!
Very well said.
The cold, wet blanket of loneliness will eventually let go.
Know it feels like it has a death grip on your soul.
Once like you, I\'d been suffering for eternity and a day...
Then I woke up one year, and the clouds had went way.
Sometimes you can\'t see the wires, but a connection HAS been made.
Because as I read your words, I heard the melody being played.
Have to believe in yourself...and you offer more than just your thoughts
One day you\'ll get paid from one of these sad songs someone bought
And we all hate feeling like we have to be fake
Maybe it\'s God\'s way to make sure we are awake
Face each challenge in life like a test.
As long as you pass more than you fail, you come out a winner on your quest.
LOL Sorry.. I read yours and got inspired. Sometimes its easier to express myself with rhymes. I think you are VERY luck and ahead of most people I know... How many people spend their life looking for their desiny? You\'ve already found your passion and your inner voice. Open up and just go for it. Try to get published. Use this pain as fuel for your pen. Demand to make a positive out of this sickness. I loved your words. Don\'t stop writing.
Nothin but Love,
Reality
I (((HUG))) u..x