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Hi everyone I struggle with anxiety and a bit of agoraphobia so I wrote this short poem titled Trapped Within to explain how I feel at times.
It's not a tall building or within tall walls. It's not within a tomb or grave at all.
The place where I'm trapped is much scarier you see.
It's not behind 4 walls but trapped within me.
It's not a tall building or within tall walls. It's not within a tomb or grave at all.
The place where I'm trapped is much scarier you see.
It's not behind 4 walls but trapped within me.
bips
Congrats, Its short but a very evocative poem. Try to come out with more writing, I am sure it will help you feel better.
crazyladydeb
I ALWAYS COME UP WITH MY BEST POEMS WHEN I'M FEELING BLUE. AND IT IS TRUE, WRITING CAN BRING OUT A LOT OF EMOTIONAL PAIN AND HELP YOU TO LET IT GO.
Andelene
My friend, your words paint a picture that I can fully relate to. You inspired me to start writing again. Thank you!
stlaries411
Very vivid.
deleted_user
Thank you all for reading and comments I am glad you enjoyed the poem !
22Lynn
I enjoy your writing. Very emotional.
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