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What Words are Best to Describe

Jennheimrich
Jennheimrich
There are few who know the URGENCY...

the pulling, the tearing

the twisting, the turning

the moaning, the crying

the desperately dying



Few words could reach me
as I suffered the punishing torment

as the world of death pushed its way
into my heart and mind compelling me,

darkly drawing me to commit suicide

hurling me towards death and death towards me
Shai
Shai
...very moving...it really speaks to me and about me...
deleted_user
deleted_user
You are a very intuitive writer. I feel like I really belong to the line, "The moaning, the crying, the desperately dying" ..... desperately dying - wow - the contrast of imagery there is insane. For me that's just screaming out that when I'm feeling suicidal on the outside I look crazed, dark, demonic, and set in my ways, no one can stop me - but on the inside I'm desperate, fragile, enigmatic, and all I want is for some force from the unknown to either take me out or back into life - but to be left in such an unresolved situation is like suffering the torments of Hell while living, breathing and suffering the consequences of life.

I don't know if that's how you meant those two words to come across but that's really what my soul sings out when my mind reads those words - hope you enjoyed - keep writing

Whit