Bravo! excellent poem :) keep it up Hope

Thank you :)

Beautiful words.

I like it...
I want you to get out of those chains too.

*Looks around for hacksaw*

Thanks for commenting guys it means alot

It's a beautiful poem - and one full of hope. You want to change, you want to break free, you are looking for the key. If you're looking for it then I am sure you will find it.

Good on you!

Thank you breaking and your right there is hope and hopefully one day i will be free

The key is inside of you. It is in your strength and will to keep going! You are already free. All you need to do now is cut those chains yourself by talking about it like you just did. Tell the world about it and then look ahead and keep walking... Take care Hope. Oh your name is also part of the key.

WOW...your quite the person.You have gifts to be reveiled.you will reach the skys hun. Beyond the sky.Your honest,thoughtful, sensitive ways have touched hearts.Thats a good quality.You touched mine.Keep writing its good for the soul healing.Thanks for sharing your feeling big big hug to you women!

Thank you both soo very much for your comments.. If i could change my name i would because with the help of all my friends on this site i now know that i am no longer hopeless but full of hope not only for me but everyone here... I will continue writing and talking and walking until i reach the sky

So well said. I love poems, even the sad ones.

Thank you :) i'm glad you liked means a lot

This is worded so perfectly, exactly how I used to feel. You will find the key, it is within you.

Please take these words from me, our past does not define who we are today, it certainly shaped us, but we are meant to be good and loved individuals.

Please take care and keep writing!

You can break those chains. Believe in you and give yourself permission to break free. hugs

Okay, so I have a choice to make, I can sit back and wait,
Or I can take action, against perverted attraction to children,
Its wrong, we all know it, but nobody shows it,
they keep that inside, so embarrassed we hide,
Its disgusting to talk about it, it makes everyone sick,
and so we don't tell, we keep that a secret,
Im starting to realize that its not the perpetrator,
It's the system,
that violates rights, and looses fights,
Im pissed as you can plainly see...
Wont you join me, come tell your story,
Survive this with GLORY...
Im ready to fight, right through my life, for all of your rights...
IM CHANGING THE WAY THIS GETS HANDLED TODAY...
BUT I NEED ALL OF YOU
TO HAVE A VOICE TOO!
Im writing a book... OUR SURVIVOR STORY... and i want to hear yours...
Anonymously or Biographically , tell me your story,
What happened to you?
Who did you tell?
What happened then?
And what happened to them?
Send your story to oursurvivorstory@gmail.com
And then you will see AWARENESS come on
To society... to people who care,
To people who can change this disaster, I SWARE.
GOD WONT LET US DOWN, HE LEADS ME ON, AND BECAUSE OF HIM IM STRONGER...

Have you ever heard of the domino effect... the proof that one can transfer energy to another...
The dominos have always fallen in a certain way, until today... But I am here, LET ME MAKE THIS CLEAR...
I AM THE BIGGER DOMINO! AND I WILL PUSH THE OTHER WAY...! OKAY... THATS ALL FOR TODAY...
BUT STAY TUNED TOMORROW, AND THE NEXT DAY TOO... UNTIL I HAVE REACHED EVERY ONE OF YOU...
THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT AND YOUR LOVE AND ATTENTION, TO CHILDREN UNITED, THEY DESERVE OUR AFFECTION!