I would love to listen to your songs, but my computer won't let me. I'll keep trying

The main things that I could use some feedback on are whether or not the spoken word is understandable (or an effect overload) and whether there is too much going on in the ending (I have strings and a guitar overlapping with different melodies, and I dunno if it clashes or not)

well missy....i checked it out :)

the spoken word part is a bit difficult to understand, but the music is very pretty....actually reminds me of concrete blond.

I agree with Jenn.. music is really nice and enjoyable listening, but even with my sound at 100%, the words were not understandable.

I can't help with ideas on how to fix it..I'm not much of a musician..

Thanks, though for sharing.

Concrete Blond is an AWESOME band to be compaired to, so thanks for that.
Still trying to work on the vocals a bit. I tried listening without any effects to my vocals, and it is still hard to understand. I am without a mic and using a...ehem...tape recorder, so hopefully I can afford a mic soon.

Oh...and I will be singing on it too in due time

I wish I could hear it

TP- What type of computer are you running?

cool , i like :)

there is a section just about 3/4 into the song..where its seems to clash with everything.....what about about turning up the acoustic guitar - so you hear soul of the steel to accent the haunting track that is behind it.......it is such a cool section that it needs to be heard. dont know if this makes sense....thank you for allowing us to hear your music!..Haiku

Awesome music. Great talent here on DS. Mame

Thanks everyone!
Haiku- That is the part I was afraid of. It seems to clash for about 2 measures when the violin comes in. Do you think the rhythm or lead guitar part should be turned up?

Hey Kuno....I believe it is the rhythm guitar....please forgive me if I have this wrong...it was the faintest of the 2 that were playing....its the one where you listen too it and you can hear it trying to come out...It changes cords when you least expect it too...but it works well with the music behind it........(Im sorry...if im not making sense...I have no formal training....aand I have been up for over 24 hrs...but..i love the song...excellent job!..) take care...

Haiku- Are you referring to the guitar that is strumming the chords? I did notice it's a bit low in the mix.
The reason why I had it low is because I had the lead steel guitar turned up all the way and it was still faint. While trying to fix the mix, I noticed that I had the compressor off (it turns up the sound and makes it more sterio). So, hopefully I can get all of the guitars leveled.
You actually helped a lot. And yeah, there are two measures at the end of the song on the strings that is out of key.

BTW- Is anyone familiar with Garageband, because when I create MP3's, they are VERY faint in comparison to the way they actually sound in Garageband. Anyone know how to boost the volume of the MP3's?

oh bumperoo...