Hi hun this is a very intence poem,but i am very sorry there is just something in my gut that tells me this is just no ordenory pome hun,you speak of death as maybe your way out of this life of troubles,pain and sadness,and lonelyness,as though there is no chance of a life for yourself hun,well honey take a look in the merrior at the good looking man that you are,not that looks is the most meaningful thing in this world honey,give yourself the change to be the proud man that you are,yes i said that,be a brave and proud man,you have come this far in life,maybe you had some abuse through your life time,or someone deeply broke your heart,or you may have lost a loved one,i don't know you that well so i do not know all you have been through in this life time,read my profile to know more about me,we have all been hurt in some way shape or form in our life,and some worse then others,please try to find the you inside of you hun,just be strong and try for once to love yourself,and be proud to be the man you would like to be,you have a careing heart,and a free spiret that wants out,to see some natural beauty in this world,i reach out my hand to you to show you there is love in this world,to lead you to Gods love for you,take my hand for i will not forsake you,i give you that hug you need so badly,just open your heart and feel the love inside,you do have the strengh inside you that God has given you to fight of the bad,and the soul to love and be loved,i hold you in my arms as a friend to comfort you,and i am very proud of you hun,i do truely care,so you live,love and be loved,laugh,cry,be happy,just give it that fight you have inside you hun,i send you cuddles and huggies for you hun,much love,you now have a true friend,carla7777....xxxooo Bless you hun...i am here for you..

thanks for sharing...i enjoyed your poem...Peace...Jah