When I was at a very low ebb!
Title. Do I Deserve Me!? Will I ever be happyOr always be sad.I'm sat here with nothingWorse than I've ever had. I'm shot down to nothingMy bodies destroyed.With teeth cracked and rottedAnd always annoyed! Have I been so awfulHave I been so bad?Maybe I just deserve itThrough the shit that I've had. Was it self inflictedThe majority I think.If I wasn't here floatingMaybe I would just sink. But the pain and misfortuneAnd the lack of worthwhile.My brain turned to jellyI forgot how to smile! Was I ever in loveDid I know what it meant?Being caned on intoxicantsWhat I needed was a friend. Seems like years ago/thank God something in me has changed. One day at a time. Who knows> djharg ps I hope this poem/lyrics is not too miserable.
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Very introspective. You are a good writer!
Rhyme! I\'ve been a rhymer most of my life ,
It\'s not a rap or prose?
It\'s things I see that give me a giggle
To get up someones NOSE!
SUNDAY 5thOct, I have been at my mothers for the weekend 4 a change. She makes some nice meals etc + it is a nice area not like the (shhhhh!)I live ,not that my home is bad .Anyway it\'s a lovely day in WiganN/Manchester orLANCS ttfn djharg