Walking in Mud

Walking alone in mud,
not a soul around.
Why scream aloud?
No one is around.
My voice falls on empty ground,
no one is around.
I comfort myself with peace
alone with my thoughts,
the safest place to be.

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drew4lostluv
drew4lostluv

Sometimes it just helps to scream, even if no one is around.
Sometimes you\'re probably not alone you just feel like you are.
Someone may still hear your scream.
I do like your poetry.
deleted_user
deleted_user

I think this one is very nice. A lot is expressed through one short poem.
shelle68
shelle68

Drew, Creative. Thank you