Too Far Gone
This is a poem I wrote long time ago, and wanted to know what you guys thought of it: 07/01/2005
Too Far Gone
Eyes glazed over
Again, I feel numb
I recognize this feeling
I'm too far gone
Sounds seem muted
Just trying to survive
My heart is falling
Into an emotional swandive
Loneliness the monster
Has claimed me again
Now I welcome the demons
I'm used to the pain
My throat closes up
My screams go ignored
Infinite sleep seems welcome
What else to live for?
Inside I rage with anger
Outside I mutilate
I've gone over the edge
My heart is full of hate
No solace in sight
No hope for the dawn
By the time the sun rises
I'll be too far gone
Too Far Gone
Eyes glazed over
Again, I feel numb
I recognize this feeling
I'm too far gone
Sounds seem muted
Just trying to survive
My heart is falling
Into an emotional swandive
Loneliness the monster
Has claimed me again
Now I welcome the demons
I'm used to the pain
My throat closes up
My screams go ignored
Infinite sleep seems welcome
What else to live for?
Inside I rage with anger
Outside I mutilate
I've gone over the edge
My heart is full of hate
No solace in sight
No hope for the dawn
By the time the sun rises
I'll be too far gone
Replies
True feelings well wrtten!!
catharsis in fascia ...very stark...and yet so many moons have past since writing this...that shows grit