THE TREES LAMENT
it stood gnarled and oldblack and boldtwisted and torturedfrom wind and coldlife stood stillon that bleak hillwhere the lonely treehad lost its will to liveand bravely stand the testof another day without a restno sap to rise within its veinsno buds to burst from gentle rainno leafy foliage overheadwhy cant i fall when i am dead annie j
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don\'t lose courage, annie. you are a very brave person.you have struggled against formidable difficulties, and one day you will come out victorious.
Take care.
Thats a beautiful poem Annie...you are very talented.
awwww...your poetry speaks so beautifully annie...it speaks to my heart...somehow, we\'re gona be ok....but writing is so healing .....and it just expresses so much....like the trees that lament...funny i was thinking about how the trees feel yesterday, and what would it be like if i was one....we must be kindred spirits:) another big hug for my new friends....
i mean , my new friend:)
If you wrote that then you have talent and much more...xxxx