hey dude
wick song, keep them up, i think they are choice...
i do freeflow poetry myself, but anything on here to express yourself has got to be good for you
take care
zan
hey chugg... this is the favorite of the two... (ha i crack myself up!!) anyway love tha song bravo!! and yea... she stole the bear from me... but love the song!!! ~amanda
Replies
very good song!!
She sits in a Dim lit room,
listening to the rain.
While the pain of dim lit thoughts
stay away.
She feels the on coming stain
a mark left behind.
From a life left unkind and Frayed
on her side she laid and cried.
Southern girl. Snow white bear your best friend.
Fingers curl around a plush heart \'till the pain goes away.
Down come the rain.
She\'s a mother of 2, and a daughter as well.
But a husband has been a long time gone.
Born and raised in town that doesn\'t understand
What goes on in her head
Why she wishes death...
So good - keep sharing
So touching and beautifully sad. Keep them coming Chuggs!
most excellent hun, keep doing it. YOU are on your way. BRAVO!!!!!
hey dude
wick song, keep them up, i think they are choice...
i do freeflow poetry myself, but anything on here to express yourself has got to be good for you
take care
zan
Great job babydoll. I really love the words. You are so talented.
thank you...xx
I like this chugs it is good and hertfelt
hey chugg... this is the favorite of the two... (ha i crack myself up!!) anyway love tha song bravo!! and yea... she stole the bear from me... but love the song!!! ~amanda