School Paper
This is another paper due tonight. Anyone want to take a stab thanks in advance and love ya.Robin To Whom It May Concern: I have been told that you need an idea for an electronic toy. I may have just what you are looking for. My idea is for a remote control submarine. This wireless toy can be used in a swimming pool, lake or in any large body of water. It will have a 10 foot long retractable antenna controlled by a remote hand held controller which will allow it to go under water. The remote controller will make the submarine go in any direction and it also has a video screen attached on the front of the sub which will allow the person operating the sub to see where it is going, even under water. The battery will be long lasting and will allow at least 3 hours of enjoyment before recharging and charger is included. You can also buy additional batteries if needed. I think this idea of a toy may just be the ideal enjoyment for your customers. It is an electronic toy; it targets young kids to adults, and can keep them busy for hours at a time. Because it’s wireless it can be used away from electrical plug-ins. Thank you for your time and consideration of my ideas. Sincerely, Robin Williams
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Fantastic.............and would be good for taking underwater pics/videos of coral reefs.....???? Sounds like a fun toy!!!!!!
I think your wordage is fantastic on this one!!!!!
Sounds great! I\'d love to see underwater and not get wet!
I want one too !!! good job.
Looks good! Like the concept!
sounds great,u got it gf,go with it,hugsssssss
This is a very good idea. I saw the drawings they were good.
Tenn, I love it. I want one for my four great-nephews. I know that they would love it since they like to take baths.
Sounds like something everyone in my family would really enjoy.
I like this one...great idea....sorry it took so long to reply...:^)
that is an awsem thing Andrew would love to have a toy like that
This one is so good, I have no suggestions at all!!! The wording, grammer, etc. are very professional. Great job! Hugs, Fern