poem for my gf

Our hearts beat at the same pace
two hearts full of love beating together
two souls convert into one
the feeling in your arms I get
so comforting
so safe
The world in so far away
when im right there together with you
your touch is like fire
you kiss like ice
you burn into my soul
we are infused together as one
This is just one i made up all the top of my head im trying to write her a nice poem to give to her on our anniversty which is aug 1 so tell me if yall like and please be honest

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I like it. I bet she will too. And I\'m glad today is better for you. :-)
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It was awesome :) You are very artistic.