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On the cross

The way I feel I don't have to Not alone at least I haveFriends and family who care so muchBut I fear if I put my pain on them theyWill find it way too much to handel alone So I give it up I give it to you For you are Closer than a Brother you Already took My pain as Your own.

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deleted_user 04/30/2010
Your poem is in the shape of a cross. I get it. God can take your burdens off you and leave you with peace in your heart. I will be here for you like so many others who are willing to help wherever we can. God Bless you sweet child. Love you, Danette

deleted_user 04/30/2010
It\'s so beautifully poetic and intriguing.....
Loving hugs
Marion

OLDBIKER 04/30/2010
Steph.

I love the way this is done. You are very creative and, the poem is beautiful too.

deleted_user 05/04/2010
i like!

deleted_user 05/13/2010
Wow, just started looking at journal posts I missed and I\'m so sorry I missed this one until now. You are so talented. Hope things are getting better for you at this time. Truly your friend, BarbaraWawa

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