Of Loss and Lament

 
Now it all turned out the way The way I feared it would Fighting back, this hopeless day Barely doing what I could I tried so hard to save it It crumbled, fallen from my grasp And so I could only break it From the questions I would ask For I might have all the questions Though the answers arrive so few Mulling over all the best ones Drawing deafness out of you Now I sit here, stumbling Wearing out what wouldn't last Actions breaking, crumbling Droughted rivers from the past Now the water it flows downhill Streaming rivers from a face I look behind to what I found, still Burnt ashes in its place Left alone to be so cold Dreams all gone, let pain unfold The love I had, it grew so old In all its precious views, it won't be told March 12, 2006 --

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Kacey1228
Kacey1228

I don\'t know what has happened specifially but I know how you\'re feeling. Hang in there. It passes eventually.
moonstar
moonstar

Beautiful sadness expressed with eloquent writing.
It will change...as everything does in this world.
The only thing we cxan count on here is...change.
That\'s the only thing that keeps me going, so I hope it helps you too.
and....Love your poetry.
Moon *
deleted_user
deleted_user

That is beautiful Crunch.
Kaitrin
Kaitrin

VERY lovely poem!---you are a truly gifted writer. Would love to see more.