nother poem

we are all strugglingtumblingdown down downand when we hit the groundits overand theres no luck in lifeno such thing as a four leaf cloverwe are all lostwe've all crossedthe lineand in a moment in timeits overand theres no more laughterno happily ever after we wait in silencefor our abundanceof happinesswe wait in wonderas we go underfeeling the rush of the thunderin all the rainin all the paincant stand it anymoreready to start a war?with the evils of the worldwe are all twirledin different directionsinside we are all curledin featle positionscared for our lives 

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sorry if it sucks
idk it was confusing when i was typing it
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Hi,
You know, your poetry is very good. And it\'s one of the best ways to get the pain, anger, disappointment in life and fear of the future out where you can deal with it. Even though you don\'t see it now, there is more to life than what you\'ve gone through so far. There are faith, love and joy waiting to be found. And even though life can be incredibly hard and painful, God can turn it around and use you to help and comfort someone else someday, because you will truly understand. Take good care of yourself, and keep writing out the pain, until one day you find a little spark of joy, hope or love in your heart, just when you least expect it.
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thank you so much!
:)