My own writing: A poem called: Gazing in Wonder
Gazing in wonder,Holding you tight,A short embrace,Helps to pass the night. Looking at your face,You smile at me,No one else smiles,Like that which I see. Your heart amazing,Your beauty, Wow!I do love you,Would you ask me how? I would tell you how,Look at your face,How could I not?You're so full of grace. You're full of great warmthYour heart is pure,I see your soul,I have found my cure. (As I said, this is my own writing: just, if you wouldn't mind: please tell me what you think; is it too mushy?) I haven't written anything like this before, so, you know... enjoy... take care folks Riddles
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