My First Entry

I slipping awayi can feel it day by dayWhy cant i just sayhow i feel?or rather call out for helpi'm losing myselfinstead of having that silent screami want to live my dreaminstead of living this nightareand overlooking signs that say bewarei no longer care.....can someone help me?i think notcan anyone see?i think everyone forgot i'm slipping awayday by daysoon i'll be adrifta dead body floating; lifelessno one can save mei'm my worse enemyor am i my own best friend?i dont think anyone can ever understand the waves crashthe wind howlssomeone hears a bashanother hears a growli'll hear nothingi wont beno one will see mei'll fade away, like the new mooni wont be backatleast, not real sooni slipping awayday by day.

Replies

deleted_user
deleted_user

That was very deep. I can tell you have a few issues inside of you. None the less... I liked it. Good job. Kepp me posted for more.
deleted_user
deleted_user

You have a really great gift of writing. I can never put my feelings into words but I you did amazingly. Sometimes writing helps so keep it up.