just finshed a poem pls leave a comment on what ya think

blind as we are blind as will ever be why dose such pain and agony have to beand thus you understand most we come acrost cannot see for there blind in one way or anotherwather they dont feel otheres pain or have not share anoters sorrowor have a hear of black and only care for them self or viwes the world w/ a harsh mouth of descriminationand so forth of wrongs ppl can do w/ thereblind or evil deedsregerdless of how ppl can be blindits a reget and pain no one cant totaly take backfor the ppl that do see is not enogh becase of lack of action and understanding and ablity to careand so it seems theres more blind then able to see is there no one who shale join in a groupto stop this maddness so then we can finaly seeor shale we forever more be in despire and darknessas we weep and morn the loss of a world that should have alwasy lived onwile we have no one to blame but ourselfs that of wich we should feel we should be put to shameas we aslo exile ourself from our world becase the world we lived onwould be alredy destroyed from are actions and petty squabblesby then it would be all but too late act now wile we still canand we can spare the phew that do see from a wolrd that got destroyedfrom are actions and thus making the world from what it should have beento a never ment to be