Edit of an amazing poem done by an amazing friend

There are four steps to stop a death, and best you learn them well
Should you have failed to see or hear the heralding or hell
First you feel the dark feelings 'till your heart's near explosion
Then when it's finally over, you perform a self-implosion
This is the step that's tricky, for to swallow without choking
You have to chew and chew but cease to taste, like burning without smoking
Third pull yourself together, get back up and look around
The rage and the sadness it must be fed, it can't just be kept in the ground
Your reflection it splits the mirror, you walk over to the stairs
The memory breaks and then dissipates like childish unholy nightmares
Because when your are descending my darling 
to the lair where nobody cares!The fear of the shadows forsakes you you breath deep and you follow throughAnd when you get down here my sweetheart, you know that I will be there!!We will spend forever together, In this lovely place that people call death.And you know that Ill never leave you. For this now is all we will have left and I know now that this is the end loveof everything that hurt us in lifedon't be scared now darling just follow me into the light.Thank you   whodoesshethinksheis for allowing me to spin this in my own special way!! It is one of the most amazing things I ever read!!! Thank you for sharing!!! Original poem  
http://www.dailystrength.org/people/835020/journal/3370736

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Summerwind81
Summerwind81

Wow...I always like reading what you write...I usually don\'t comment but this one is amazing...thanks so much for sharing it :)
deleted_user
deleted_user

Great writing! Love this line!
\"The memory breaks and then dissipates like childish unholy nightmares\"
MythreeRugrats
MythreeRugrats

Summerwind is right, this is amazing work