A TRIP THROUGH LIFE

I'M HEADED ON A JOURNEY THROUGH LIFE'S RIGID ROADSWHERE IT WILL LEAD ME NO ONE KNOWS BUT AS I TRAVEL I'LL PASS THE CITY OF SORROW AND PAININ THE CENTER OF THIS TOWN IS A PLACECALLED LONELY LANE THEN I WILL PASS BY THE POOR PALACETHAT IS SLOWLY SINKING FROM THE SEA OF SADNESS WHAT WILL BE NEXT? WHAT WILL I FIND?I SEE A TOWN CALLED PEACEFUL PLEASURESAT THE BORDERLINE IN THIS TOWN I CAN UNLOCK MY HOPES IN THE FIELD OF DREAMSTHEN TAKE A DIP IN SUCCESS STREAM NEXT I'LL TAKE THAT DETOUR ONTODETERMINED DRIVETAKE A LEFT ON ABLE AVENUE AND I WILL STRIVE AS I KEEP GOING I'LL SEE THE HOUSE ON HAPPY HILLSOON I'LL REACH THE SCHOOL OF LESSONS LEARNEDBUT THERE'S MORE TO SEE STILL SO I'LL JUST KEEP GOINGTO SEE WHERE IT LEADSTHERE ARE MANY TWISTS AND TURNSAHEAD OF ME I WILL CONTINUE DOWN LIFE'S ROADAND SOON KNOW MY DESTINYBUT IF I CHOOSE THE RIGHT PATHI WILL HAVE SUCCEEDED IN MY JOURNEY   

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I LOVE that! You can really write! That\'s amazing!!

Beth
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You are descrbing the journey of life..or so it feels for me..thank you. It is lovely..
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You\'re a real inspiration.
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Very good. Beautiful, inspiring, meaningful!
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Wonderful poem. :)
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leads me to the tip of a shotgun barrell ready to blow my head into a million small peices along my parents\' bedroom