a poem/song that i wrote, sorry it's not very good lol but ya. hope you guy's like it..Little GirlThere's a little girl, broken down, falling to the ground. Wont you pick her up, please pick her up from a world that's turned so quick.She doesnt' understand the chemical's formed inside his head. Why would he choose to go to her, to touch her in her bed?She's slowly dieing inside and no one to recognize, but if they would only look into her eye's they would finaly see the hurt he's caused her every night.Now she's living her life day by day woundering what will come her way. For she is strong and she is brave and she will keep him away.There's a little girl, broken down, falling to the ground. Wont you let her pick you up, please let her pick you up. she will never leave you in your time of need, and will carry you if you please.by:kayrl
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great poem. Keep up the good work in your poetry.
Very nice. Thank you for sharing with us!
Aww sweetie what a great poem, i completely understan what you are going through.Good work on the poem, keep it up! Love ya xxxx
its a greatt poem.
its so sad but its veryy good.
very good poem
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Hi honey. Sorry u r living with that perv. I wish u spoke to your counselor and got out. It\'s damaging even if he doesn\'t do anything. Im here if u need someone to talk to who has been there!!!! Love u, Nichole
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Thats Ah rle Good Poem =)x
Ahm Here If You need To Talk.
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