umm just a poem i wrote during school. nights become dark and scary, but i do not worrie.close your eyes close your eyes my best friend comes out to lend a cutting hand, i do not worrie.close your eyes close your eyesthe pain is to much and i am not tough, i do not worrie.close your eyes close your eyesi do not worrie, i can not. This pain is just to much.i close my eyes and say good byei close my eyesi close my eyes. do not worrie about this poem i am fine, just something i feel inside and so i just started writing.
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Writing is a good way to get thoughts out instead of harboring them inside and then inevitably being expressed in a like manner -- harmfully. Many feelings can be worked out through writing, and I\'m glad to see that you use it as a tool. I understand when you say not to worry that it\'s a poem. After my father died when I was twelve, I use to write a lot of poems about death. A friend\'s parent thought that I was obsessed with death, but I was just working it out. I told that person that if I were so obsessed, I\'d be dead. I suppose he didn\'t understand and that comment may have been shocking. Oh well. The best thing is that, although it was very difficult, I did get past it all. Keep writing! Write of the contrasting good side too, okay?
good poem, il have to find mine and share them with you as well.
wow, i write too and im in love with this poem. keep writing. its really simple yet moving. don\'t worry about invoking happiness into a reader, just an emotion in general.
I\'m so glad you shared that with everyone. I know sometimes it helps to share. Remember we are all here for you.
Oh wow that was definitely a good poem, i like the rythem to it.Great job hun! xxx