I have been thinking about this alot and now i've finally made up my mind. I've been writing poetry for awhile now and well i would like to share it with you all...i do hope you like them...i wrote these on true life, my life...kinda telling a story...i will be honest with you and tell you that these are not happy,beautiful or anything like that type of poems...but their still poems...so i hope you enjoy them...i willl post all the ones i've wrote every other day but i thought to start you off i should start with the peom i sent off and is now being published. Whisper Goodbye! Your words cut me like a blade Breaking all those promises you ever made Leaving me here, so empty, so whole Nothing but a shell, you haven’t yet stole The whispers of a goodbye One so cruel, there’s no answer, simply no reply A hand that shivers so cold Hangs unloved, a hand you were meant to hold No questions, nor answers, just plain get up and leave A world torn apart, having to go on. Not having the option to accept it and grieve I had to be strong, for everyone else who needed me Ignoring the feelings I chose to hide Not one person, who would understand and see, So in which I had no-one to confide Your words echo through my ears Run through my veins An endless amount of tears, followed by fears A muffled voice is all that remains For a child so beautifully broken Luv u All Becka xoxox
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that is a beautiful poem. it really is. xxx
i dont know what to say. i love your words and skill, but i hate the pain and the things that caused you to feel badly. i would give anything to have changed that event for you. your too nice, too beautiful, too talented and hurt far too much. NOTHING you ever did as a child could not be forgiven. your my hero becka.
all my love.
dennis
Oh I really like this one!!!
thats soooooooooooooooo good.
Wow... just.. wow