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Icing
I have written down some quotes from my four main characters. From what they say, which one do you like the best? Which one is the most interesting? If you could tell me why, that might be a big help. If you have any other thoughts about this, share those too.
Yeshar:
- Rise my beloved dead!
- What's wrong little man?
- I'll be there in a flash, you'd all be dying to see it, if you get my meaning.
- HEHEHEHEHE!!!
- You're so very very small, you have no idea.
- Look at my face, do you think anything frightens me? I AM FEAR. I AM DEATH COME FOR THEE!
- Deadly mists surround me and I'm content.
- You will be mine and I'll torture your spirit forever!
- Mmmmm. I love when their eyes roll up like that.
- I made it myself! Isn't it beautiful?
- Go get them, my pets!
- Maybe I'm not crazy and just happen to like the craziest ideas and murder.
- I don't like music, unless its instruments are flesh ripping, bone crushing, blood gurgling -what?
- My first kill might've been the best. It changed me. This is what I was meant to do, of course my parents didn't approve, so I decided to show them. Show them what I'm meant to do. After that they had nothing more to say.
- The only way I know we're friends, is because I don't want to step on you and crush your ribs.
- Strangling might be my favorite thing to do, but I savor it by mixing things up.
- I had this dream the world was so tiny it fit on my hand, so I put it in my mouth. HAHAHAHA!!! So tasty.
- There's just something about stabbing someone in the throat that makes me laugh.
Secria:
- Death is always right behind me.
- RAAAH!
- Would be killing a lot more if I was on my own.
- Cowards deserve to die!
- Don't look at me!
- Maybe one of the biggest cowards is me.
- This land is so different from where I come from.
- At times I feel I like to be hurt and that I want others to fear me. I turn my pain around and make it into.. joy I guess. Somehow.
- DIE! ...DIE! ...DIE!
- Leave me alone.
- At times I feel I shouldn't have embraced rage. Now I just can't live without it. It solves all my problems.
- There's so many things I just don't understand.
- My purpose in life is to become strong, protect the king and unite with him, if he chooses me.
- It seems that the more I kill, the more people come to me, to be killed. It doesn't stop.
- My sword is bright-silver, as I use it, it becomes lighter, so I wish it was bigger now.
- When I was on my own, I used to eat my opponents after defeating them..
Mev:
- If this doesn't end up killing us, I don't know what.
- You're probably a traitor.
- I hate adventurers that happily stumble to their deaths.
- Is this the part where you reveal your master plan?
- I can't take more of this nonsense.
- This is so stupid.
- Of course you are, I'm not surprised in the least.
- Isn't this everyones dream, what all adventurers strive for? Going to prison...? (sarcasm)
- You're some kind of moron, aren't you?
- All I want is to go home, but I'm thrown out head-first.
- I'd be a lot nicer if life wasn't such a bitch all the time.
- It's just my life, I don't deserve to have anything. For some reason. I'm sure if I ever feel happy and content I'd probably be dying. Watch, it's going to happen.
- I seem to have a feeling it's going to explode, and it probably will.
- I'm usually never wrong. Sadly I seem to never have any choice. Adventure sweeps me up like a big wave and I drown over and over.
- Don't worry, it's too early for us to die in a crash-landing. We haven't suffered enough yet.
- I have a lot of things to be happy about... no matter what happens, eventually this will all be over.. wait, that's just ONE thing.
Avil:
- If I want to experience some other emotions I just have to go back and change the ones I have.
- I like to combine words to make new ones when I can't express all the joy I'm feeling.
- Awesomatic!
- Fantacular!
- Magnificing!
- Amazinomenal!
- Stupending!
- Exceleptional!
- Wonderpressive! Wait, that sounds like one depressive. THAT's NOT GOOD AT ALL!
- Phenomerous! Wait, that kinda sounds like pheromones.
- Where I come from, we are rewarded with emotions for work. Isn't that what life is all about? Feelings?
- I'm not sure I have more or less control with my emotions, I choose these ones I have, but I know they might not always be appropriate.
- I think people like innocent, I'm anything but that.
Then again, they say innocence is an illusion.
- I know I'm annoying, but I can't help it, then again that's the usual case for annoying people, I think, so nevermind.
- WOOHOO! I shouldn't be so excited!
- Joy is my favorite emotion, I think and another one, but that one's a secret.
- The more advanced emotions, they cost more work.
- I can't fight. I can help you with your wounds though.
- I know this is very sad, but I can't stop smiling, I'm so sorry, even if I don't feel that way. I just haven't equipped a sadness emotion.
Yeshar:
- Rise my beloved dead!
- What's wrong little man?
- I'll be there in a flash, you'd all be dying to see it, if you get my meaning.
- HEHEHEHEHE!!!
- You're so very very small, you have no idea.
- Look at my face, do you think anything frightens me? I AM FEAR. I AM DEATH COME FOR THEE!
- Deadly mists surround me and I'm content.
- You will be mine and I'll torture your spirit forever!
- Mmmmm. I love when their eyes roll up like that.
- I made it myself! Isn't it beautiful?
- Go get them, my pets!
- Maybe I'm not crazy and just happen to like the craziest ideas and murder.
- I don't like music, unless its instruments are flesh ripping, bone crushing, blood gurgling -what?
- My first kill might've been the best. It changed me. This is what I was meant to do, of course my parents didn't approve, so I decided to show them. Show them what I'm meant to do. After that they had nothing more to say.
- The only way I know we're friends, is because I don't want to step on you and crush your ribs.
- Strangling might be my favorite thing to do, but I savor it by mixing things up.
- I had this dream the world was so tiny it fit on my hand, so I put it in my mouth. HAHAHAHA!!! So tasty.
- There's just something about stabbing someone in the throat that makes me laugh.
Secria:
- Death is always right behind me.
- RAAAH!
- Would be killing a lot more if I was on my own.
- Cowards deserve to die!
- Don't look at me!
- Maybe one of the biggest cowards is me.
- This land is so different from where I come from.
- At times I feel I like to be hurt and that I want others to fear me. I turn my pain around and make it into.. joy I guess. Somehow.
- DIE! ...DIE! ...DIE!
- Leave me alone.
- At times I feel I shouldn't have embraced rage. Now I just can't live without it. It solves all my problems.
- There's so many things I just don't understand.
- My purpose in life is to become strong, protect the king and unite with him, if he chooses me.
- It seems that the more I kill, the more people come to me, to be killed. It doesn't stop.
- My sword is bright-silver, as I use it, it becomes lighter, so I wish it was bigger now.
- When I was on my own, I used to eat my opponents after defeating them..
Mev:
- If this doesn't end up killing us, I don't know what.
- You're probably a traitor.
- I hate adventurers that happily stumble to their deaths.
- Is this the part where you reveal your master plan?
- I can't take more of this nonsense.
- This is so stupid.
- Of course you are, I'm not surprised in the least.
- Isn't this everyones dream, what all adventurers strive for? Going to prison...? (sarcasm)
- You're some kind of moron, aren't you?
- All I want is to go home, but I'm thrown out head-first.
- I'd be a lot nicer if life wasn't such a bitch all the time.
- It's just my life, I don't deserve to have anything. For some reason. I'm sure if I ever feel happy and content I'd probably be dying. Watch, it's going to happen.
- I seem to have a feeling it's going to explode, and it probably will.
- I'm usually never wrong. Sadly I seem to never have any choice. Adventure sweeps me up like a big wave and I drown over and over.
- Don't worry, it's too early for us to die in a crash-landing. We haven't suffered enough yet.
- I have a lot of things to be happy about... no matter what happens, eventually this will all be over.. wait, that's just ONE thing.
Avil:
- If I want to experience some other emotions I just have to go back and change the ones I have.
- I like to combine words to make new ones when I can't express all the joy I'm feeling.
- Awesomatic!
- Fantacular!
- Magnificing!
- Amazinomenal!
- Stupending!
- Exceleptional!
- Wonderpressive! Wait, that sounds like one depressive. THAT's NOT GOOD AT ALL!
- Phenomerous! Wait, that kinda sounds like pheromones.
- Where I come from, we are rewarded with emotions for work. Isn't that what life is all about? Feelings?
- I'm not sure I have more or less control with my emotions, I choose these ones I have, but I know they might not always be appropriate.
- I think people like innocent, I'm anything but that.
Then again, they say innocence is an illusion.
- I know I'm annoying, but I can't help it, then again that's the usual case for annoying people, I think, so nevermind.
- WOOHOO! I shouldn't be so excited!
- Joy is my favorite emotion, I think and another one, but that one's a secret.
- The more advanced emotions, they cost more work.
- I can't fight. I can help you with your wounds though.
- I know this is very sad, but I can't stop smiling, I'm so sorry, even if I don't feel that way. I just haven't equipped a sadness emotion.
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