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One good thing and many more
Sometimes have knocked upon my door
Good things that I could not see
My eyes were blind by fear of me
But this I did not know
I only wished the knocks on the door would go
But they kept coming just the same
I hid in the dark curled up in shame
Persistently they kept on coming
I escaped from my house and started running
I ran from good thinking I was running from bad
I was running for my life and it drove me mad
I ran till I collapsed in pain
But goodness came to my door again
This time I didn't know what to do
I had no strength left and my ideas were few
So I opened up that door a crack
Good things came in and they never went back
I only had to learn to see
That my biggest fear is the fear of me
I need help to keep myself in check
When I'm alone too long I become a wreck
I need my good brothers and my sisters near
And one good thing is they are always here.
Sometimes have knocked upon my door
Good things that I could not see
My eyes were blind by fear of me
But this I did not know
I only wished the knocks on the door would go
But they kept coming just the same
I hid in the dark curled up in shame
Persistently they kept on coming
I escaped from my house and started running
I ran from good thinking I was running from bad
I was running for my life and it drove me mad
I ran till I collapsed in pain
But goodness came to my door again
This time I didn't know what to do
I had no strength left and my ideas were few
So I opened up that door a crack
Good things came in and they never went back
I only had to learn to see
That my biggest fear is the fear of me
I need help to keep myself in check
When I'm alone too long I become a wreck
I need my good brothers and my sisters near
And one good thing is they are always here.
Shlay
This almost made me cry. Thank you so much for posting this. Beautiful.
starfish
Wow. :)
LornaR
Thank you. I would edit this if I could. I just kind of whipped it out from nowhere cause I wanted to write something. It's kind of cute I guess. Glad you like it anyhow. It is true for me. I missed out on so much of life. It's just a rotten shame. And now it is so hard and I am so uneasy that I am still going around blind.
starfish
That's just what I'm after here....the less editing the better, unless you just plain make a mistake.
Shelly4
I loved this and it flowed with your true emotions...........awesome, thanks for sharing. xo
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