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Roots91
Don't care what time it is
I'm so lonely
There's a light out there
If only you would show me
Can't really talk about it
Handcuffed to my secrets
Don't want to offend you
But don't want to have to lie
It's got a gun to my my head
And I'm crying, I'm crying red
But have no fear
I'll swallow all my tears if you come near
Everything's alright
Come close, it won't bite
Come closer, it won't bite
Its gonna be an okay night
Sometimes I can't sleep
The nightmares cut too deep
Anxious dreams
I pull my hair and scream
It's out for blood
I'm bleeding, here comes the flood
Try as I might
I'm not gonna sleep tonight, but
Everything's alright
Come close, it won't bite
Come closer, it won't bite
Its gonna be an okay night
Those nights I still cannot sleep
The times when the pain cut so deep
And the still open wounds reside in my eyelids
My fears have found the courage to escape the place in which they hid
Memories burn images into a black ceiling
A cigarette that once burned a hole in my arm
Forced to lock up what I was feeling
Says if you hear no scream, there is no harm
My vocal chords expressed surrender
As words went to slumber
My mind screamed murder
But all the body could offer was a shudder
Nothingness my lost tongue uttered
Ready to take its place with the rest of the world in the gutter
Lay down to a world much bigger than itself
And lock meaning and purpose high on a shelf
A history of oppression
And we havenât learned a lesson
Nights filled with depression
And he still wonât learn a lesson
I'm so lonely
There's a light out there
If only you would show me
Can't really talk about it
Handcuffed to my secrets
Don't want to offend you
But don't want to have to lie
It's got a gun to my my head
And I'm crying, I'm crying red
But have no fear
I'll swallow all my tears if you come near
Everything's alright
Come close, it won't bite
Come closer, it won't bite
Its gonna be an okay night
Sometimes I can't sleep
The nightmares cut too deep
Anxious dreams
I pull my hair and scream
It's out for blood
I'm bleeding, here comes the flood
Try as I might
I'm not gonna sleep tonight, but
Everything's alright
Come close, it won't bite
Come closer, it won't bite
Its gonna be an okay night
Those nights I still cannot sleep
The times when the pain cut so deep
And the still open wounds reside in my eyelids
My fears have found the courage to escape the place in which they hid
Memories burn images into a black ceiling
A cigarette that once burned a hole in my arm
Forced to lock up what I was feeling
Says if you hear no scream, there is no harm
My vocal chords expressed surrender
As words went to slumber
My mind screamed murder
But all the body could offer was a shudder
Nothingness my lost tongue uttered
Ready to take its place with the rest of the world in the gutter
Lay down to a world much bigger than itself
And lock meaning and purpose high on a shelf
A history of oppression
And we havenât learned a lesson
Nights filled with depression
And he still wonât learn a lesson
coolkidrthomas
wow. this is amazing. I love the rhyme scheme...
Roots91
oh thank you!
amzgrace
wow...that is deep! And GooD!
Roots91
Sorry I haven't checked this in forever, but thank you very much!
starfish
I especially like the line, "handcuffed to my secrets"....this is great!!! Thanks for sharing it.
Roots91
thanks! :)
shadowsteve0421
This is amazing my friend...so real...paints a vivid picture in my mind. I think it truly resonates with a lot of us and the dark times many here endure. Wish I truly had the patience to really explore and write about such emotions but alas my mind wanders to far after a few lines. Again a beautiful dark inspiration and i look for more of your writings to come.
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