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LaughItOut 12/04/2013

Blow-out a candle
Make a wish
Lose an eye lash
Make a Wish
See a shooting star
Make a wish
Throw some change in a fountain
Make a Wish

Notice that a wish is always followed up
After something is lost
As when a candle loses its light
And a person loses an eye lash
And the atmosphere loses a star
And a person loses their change
Well if I lost my life
You Can Make a Wish

warmest 03/10/2016

I like the way you use repetition in the first stanza and come back toit in the last line.
I wish.. you well.

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