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This group was created for people who feel they have been contacted by their loved ones after death and to share their stories and experiences. I encourage all of you to share your amazing stories and lift each other up.Based on the book " Hello From Heaven" IN DEDICATION TO:(CRYSTAL NICHOLSEN, CADENCE TORRES 2/11/07) and (RYAN SCAMMAN-RAWSON 4/15/06).May they shine...

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Broken

wickedewok09
wickedewok09
I wrote this poem a few days ago and wondering if I could get some feed back? I haven't really wrote poetry before little here for classes.



Broken



I lay here broken,
the pain is too strong,
the guilt still haunts,
the tears still fall.

The days are longer,
the nights are colder.
Whats bring me here
is a happy ending gone wrong.

A happy ending that never happen,
or will happen.
The story is done for you and me.
Can't change what happen or add more memories.

Its time,
to get up from this bed,
to confront the guilts that aren't mine,
to cherish the love and memories
and to embrace the tears
and no longer fear of tomorrow and what it may bring.
deleted_user
deleted_user
It was very moving. I think this is a good start. Maybe just a few proof read errors. Like inserting a "the" .. here , and there.
It is very good , and i completely identify with what it says.

Laura
deleted_user
deleted_user
ohhh this is really really good!!!! its very strong!!!
wickedewok09
wickedewok09
Thanks :)
KellyLee105
KellyLee105
Very touching!! trying to change what happen was the hardest for me, thats when anger creeps in, knowing we can't change what happen..but it did take away the fear of death, I've been to about 4 funerals since my sons passing, and it helps that we are not alone...
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