personally I'd rather love to see your poetry honey, post away :)

i Think thats a great idea!!!!!

Would love to read your poetry.

This one is called Panic. I imagine a few of you may be able to relate,

Panic

Icy fingers frozen death
Creeps beneath my skin
Iron bands crush my chest
Death is rolling in

Breathing hard there is no air
My vision starts to swim
Tingling fingers nose and toes
Death is rolling in

I need to run, to hide, no use
There is no help around
The tears stream freely down my face
So scared I make no sound

I'm sinking slowly to the floor
My world is turning black
To die would be a blessing now
There is no turning back.

thats very deep, I love the way you describe everything so intimately it's kind of beautiful in a macabre sort of way. the way you describe panic creeping up on you then heighten the tension with the repetition of 'rolling in' is really really evocative. Very well done but are you okay?

Me? Im awesome, I wrote these a few years ago when I was really bad with anxiety and depression. I know sometimes people need to feel theyre not alone or having difficulties eplaining how they feel... Im hoping some of the things I write show them theyre not alone and we understand,

Me? Im awesome, I wrote these a few years ago when I was really bad with anxiety and depression. I know sometimes people need to feel theyre not alone or having difficulties eplaining how they feel... Im hoping some of the things I write show them theyre not alone and we understand,

well you damn well succeeded. very very powerful stuff, you should post more. Words can help people so much I think a lot of people would find these helpful x

Ill start them in a new thread called Poetry so people know what theyre looking at

thanks for sharing with us, i also suffer from panic attacks.

Was sitting here smiling at your writing poetry and it brought back memories. My youngest is now 26 yrs old. When she was in high school, she painted the bathroom upstairs a bright yellow and wrote all her poetry all over the walls and door. Today they are still there and we get something to read over and over again and can smile. Thank you for the memorie

post away!


wish there was a cool way to post my paintings..maybe on my profile...

id love to see your painting if you can get them up here

And Grams... your bathroom sounds amazing

love poetry, would enjoy reading yours. please post as much as you want

I started a new post called Poetry ive added some there
Some is sad some isnt