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This poem is about the one thing everyone has experienced from time to time, at one or more times in our lives, That is, When someone barges in on you without Knocking! It's Called "Forbidden Entry".
Forbidden Entry (Part 1)
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When If you Enter, Proceed with Care,
Only First do Knock, Yes, That is Fair.
This Request I make, Please Beware,
Do not Neglect, If you Dare.
This I Say, and I must Forewarn,
Deal without Haste, in thus, Save your Crown.
Pay such Heed, Learn your Lesson,
For without Obedience, There'll be no Blessin'.
This I Say, and with Due Respect,
Follow these Orders, and with no Regrets.
Act in Peace, Do not Detest,
Enter your Plea, Make no Contest.
Now your Hand is ready, Go Ahead,
Make your Move, or Leave Instead.
The Choice is Yours, No matter the Deed,
You'll end up Dead, when there's no Retreat.
These Few Words may Save your Life,
'For When you Enter, Do without Strife'.
If what I Charge sounds Good enough,
Then you may Exit, from off my Turf.
Copyright 2003 Steve M Q.
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Forbidden Entry (Part 2)
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You have Failed to Obey, It is Sad to say,
Now I must Repeat, in perhaps, Another way.
These Rules I've laid, So Easy to see,
Why the Punishment you Seek, It is to be.
In Disregard, You Failed to Pass,
This Simple Test of Patience Past.
You seem in Attempt to Regain my Trust,
Now is too Late, it is your Fate I Enthrust.
The words I relate, "Are Harsh," you say,
"Just Loyalty and Honor are Hard to Play."
I knew You wouldn't play it my Way,
Now you are Sentenced, and You must Pay.
Eternity is Now Laid Before your Eyes,
The Time has Come, to Pay your Tithes.
A Plea of Guilt, This You have made,
To Pay your Dues, and without the Hate.
Your Life has Ended, This You had seen,
"An Intrusion so Rude, Oh, How could it be?"
There is No Way Out, and There are No Dice,
For a Forbidden Entry, It is the Only Price.
Copyright 2003 Steve M Q.
Forbidden Entry (Part 1)
------------------------
When If you Enter, Proceed with Care,
Only First do Knock, Yes, That is Fair.
This Request I make, Please Beware,
Do not Neglect, If you Dare.
This I Say, and I must Forewarn,
Deal without Haste, in thus, Save your Crown.
Pay such Heed, Learn your Lesson,
For without Obedience, There'll be no Blessin'.
This I Say, and with Due Respect,
Follow these Orders, and with no Regrets.
Act in Peace, Do not Detest,
Enter your Plea, Make no Contest.
Now your Hand is ready, Go Ahead,
Make your Move, or Leave Instead.
The Choice is Yours, No matter the Deed,
You'll end up Dead, when there's no Retreat.
These Few Words may Save your Life,
'For When you Enter, Do without Strife'.
If what I Charge sounds Good enough,
Then you may Exit, from off my Turf.
Copyright 2003 Steve M Q.
*******************
Forbidden Entry (Part 2)
------------------------
You have Failed to Obey, It is Sad to say,
Now I must Repeat, in perhaps, Another way.
These Rules I've laid, So Easy to see,
Why the Punishment you Seek, It is to be.
In Disregard, You Failed to Pass,
This Simple Test of Patience Past.
You seem in Attempt to Regain my Trust,
Now is too Late, it is your Fate I Enthrust.
The words I relate, "Are Harsh," you say,
"Just Loyalty and Honor are Hard to Play."
I knew You wouldn't play it my Way,
Now you are Sentenced, and You must Pay.
Eternity is Now Laid Before your Eyes,
The Time has Come, to Pay your Tithes.
A Plea of Guilt, This You have made,
To Pay your Dues, and without the Hate.
Your Life has Ended, This You had seen,
"An Intrusion so Rude, Oh, How could it be?"
There is No Way Out, and There are No Dice,
For a Forbidden Entry, It is the Only Price.
Copyright 2003 Steve M Q.
deleted_user
loved your poem...and i will always remember to knock...:)
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