depression poetry Community Group
this group is for people to post and comment on any poetry and stories written
So as I have realized, things get easier when you know when to quit, to give up. I've also learned poetry can be like life. In an attempt to write something I feel, I started a new poem. A few keystrokes later I had a start. I sat and looked at what was now on the page. I suddenly realized that I had finished in just a few lines. All I wanted to say was written. I share those words with you now:
Hope is gone
Dream has shattered
Life's meaning lost
Just like that I was done. Nothing left to say. Moral of the story, Life continues...but my hopes, dreams, meaning ends here, now.
Hope is gone
Dream has shattered
Life's meaning lost
Just like that I was done. Nothing left to say. Moral of the story, Life continues...but my hopes, dreams, meaning ends here, now.
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I miss traveling with my husband. Has anyone found a specific site regarding cruising for widow/widowers or any sightseeing trips. Not interested in being with couples and kids,,,I realize a cruise ship will have a portion size of families and couples, but perhaps they also put together a part of the cruise ship for groups of widows/widowers????
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A friend sent this to me..As far as I can see, grief will never truly end.It may become softer overtime, more gentleand some days will feel sharp.But grief will last as long as Love does - ForeverIt's simply the way the absence of your loved onemanifests in your heart. A deep longing accompaniedby the deepest Love some days. The heavy fog mayreturn and the next day, it may recede.Once again, it's...
I am in reality with the second line
The third line is the so-sad truth
Give me a break, it is Saturday night and I need emotional support.
very well done.
sorry for your sadness.
xx
dreams may be shattered but more waiting in the wings
you have just lost yourr way for a while lifes meaning will return
hugs x
dreams only shatter in the mind's eye - new dreams will be born
life's meaning is the biggest mystery of all - not lost, but unnoticed
life is a battle. if you give up, life wins. there are no answers in death. life is a race - you can't crash your car into the wall just because you're in last place. everybody has a purpose. it's your job to find out what that purpose is and to let it fluorish.
i don't know what happened to you to make you feel this way, but a lot of us are in the same boat, in the same type of situation, and we realize and identify what you're going through.