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i wrote this when i self harmed
KNIFE
The knife is out
waiting
waiting
waiting
to feel my skin
it needs to cut
to make me feel
and release my
pain
pain
pain
The knife is there
smiling
at me
waiting
and willing
to be used
it needs to feel
warm
red blood
flow
flow
flow
The blade is red
as blood drips
away
away
away
from the cuts
there
on my arms
Pain released
the blade
lies still
smiling
smiling
smiling
its will
was done
head hung in shame
as i watch it flow
and wonder why
i feel
guilt
guilt
guilt
KNIFE
The knife is out
waiting
waiting
waiting
to feel my skin
it needs to cut
to make me feel
and release my
pain
pain
pain
The knife is there
smiling
at me
waiting
and willing
to be used
it needs to feel
warm
red blood
flow
flow
flow
The blade is red
as blood drips
away
away
away
from the cuts
there
on my arms
Pain released
the blade
lies still
smiling
smiling
smiling
its will
was done
head hung in shame
as i watch it flow
and wonder why
i feel
guilt
guilt
guilt
deleted_user
I am so sorry as I read this. I can not imagine where you are in your world, what life is like for you. I know you must be very unhappy and I wish you comfort right now. I wish I could reach you. I just cannot relate and the thought of what you do just does not make any sense to me. I hope you find someone who can help you. Try to love and appreciate yourself. Think about tomorrow and where you might find yourself in 15 years, what will you want to share with your children, how would you want them to live?? I wish you well . I wish you peace.
deleted_user
This is amazing, i can feel the knife & pain, i can see the blood dripping. WOW! U really did a gud job=)
inrealpain
both of you thank you
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