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I hate always trying
Words plunge off my lips and crumble before hitting the paper
Asking myself why I take this shit on a daily basis
No one can understand this to its full extent
Today I feel as though my pain has reached its maturity
This is not what I bargained for
Oppression leading me by the hand
Dancing around the truth
It just cant end like this
Entire diatribes, but never read between the lines
Words plunge off my lips and crumble before hitting the paper
Asking myself why I take this shit on a daily basis
No one can understand this to its full extent
Today I feel as though my pain has reached its maturity
This is not what I bargained for
Oppression leading me by the hand
Dancing around the truth
It just cant end like this
Entire diatribes, but never read between the lines
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(((Hugs)))---rae
To me hon this says " I CAN'T DO THIS ANYMORE!! "
Dieing is my only way out....
I don't know if this is your Hidden message BUT,
as a Psychologist who has gone through this crap 29 years..
I tried to end it twice and then
I figured out that all this time, I have been fighting to LIVE!!!
That is when I promised myself, one day I WILL be at the top of this
steep steep mountain and will
hold my arms UP in VICTORY!!!
Until then, Onward Brave Soul...
Hugs
Ravin
And for anyone who didn't find the message (sorry), here it is....
Read from the first to last beginning letter of each sentence, vertically.
I hate always trying
W ords plunge off my lips and crumble before hitting the paper
A sking myself why I take this shit on a daily basis
N o one can understand this to its full extent
T oday I feel as though my pain has reached its maturity
T his is not what I bargained for
O ppression leading me by the hand
D ancing around the truth
I t just cant end like this
E ntire diatribes, but never read between the lines
I have done many other poems like this.....happier ones of course..