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deleted_user
deleted_user
I hate always trying

Words plunge off my lips and crumble before hitting the paper
Asking myself why I take this shit on a daily basis
No one can understand this to its full extent
Today I feel as though my pain has reached its maturity

This is not what I bargained for
Oppression leading me by the hand

Dancing around the truth
It just cant end like this
Entire diatribes, but never read between the lines
Testycatlady
Testycatlady
Reading between the lines is difficult for some. Very emotional.
deleted_user
deleted_user
Very true.

There is an actual hidden message in this poem. I probably should not have written this one, but it is how I feel. :o(
deleted_user
deleted_user
you should always write how you feel, I often write things I don't fully understand, they just come out
deleted_user
deleted_user
i read this one on your journal. i wrote that it took alot of courage. and also i hope you know that we're here for you. if you need to talk.

(((Hugs)))---rae
Ravin714
Ravin714
" my pain has reached it's maturity "
To me hon this says " I CAN'T DO THIS ANYMORE!! "
Dieing is my only way out....
I don't know if this is your Hidden message BUT,
as a Psychologist who has gone through this crap 29 years..
I tried to end it twice and then
I figured out that all this time, I have been fighting to LIVE!!!
That is when I promised myself, one day I WILL be at the top of this
steep steep mountain and will
hold my arms UP in VICTORY!!!
Until then, Onward Brave Soul...
Hugs
Ravin
deleted_user
deleted_user
I feel silly for acting this way, but I guess we all get desperate sometimes. Anyway, thank you to everyone who took time to send me messages of encouragement. :o) :o)

And for anyone who didn't find the message (sorry), here it is....
Read from the first to last beginning letter of each sentence, vertically.


I hate always trying

W ords plunge off my lips and crumble before hitting the paper
A sking myself why I take this shit on a daily basis
N o one can understand this to its full extent
T oday I feel as though my pain has reached its maturity

T his is not what I bargained for
O ppression leading me by the hand

D ancing around the truth
I t just cant end like this
E ntire diatribes, but never read between the lines

I have done many other poems like this.....happier ones of course..
deleted_user
deleted_user
I know the feeling but it's so selfish as far as I personally feel. I talk about it, write about it, but I don't think I could ever do it. Don't feel stupid for sharing your feelings, please. We all get down. Right now I'm as down as I think I've ever been,except when I was married to my last husband, then I used to have visions of me killing myself. Now it's just the constant pain that makes me want to die, I just want the pain to end, not really my life
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