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Sharing my literary work

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http://www.authspot.com/Short-Stories/When-Michael-Met-Minda-.29326

I mentioned this before and I realized that I really wanted to share this again.

This is the story of my first date. It has been published and I have made all of 8 cents off of it. Ppl who read it always inquire about part 2..it's in the works..I just don't know how to end it. If you like it please leave a comment.
The more you like the more recognition I get.

Some of you may have already read it.
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Was that 8 cents before or after the stamp?
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You know I have yet to recieve a check but my account says 8 cents.
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I read it and it sounds typical.
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G, sock if I were a less confident person I would take it personally.
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You write very good. I wish I could write as well. I failed 10th grade english twice...lol.

The story needs to be more dramatic I think if you want people to buy it.

Most love stories are typical.

Keep writting....
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part 2 has a little bit more steam....a lot more.
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two questions
why did you write this?
why do you want people to read this?
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The story behind me writing this; a friend of mind had a creative writing assignment and needed my help. IN order to make it simple and something we could work on together i wrote it about how she and I met. I got blocked writing it and decide to write a similar story that turned into how I met they guy I was seeing at the time.

It was a way of expressing myself and sharing my life after I separated from my husband. People would read it because if I do say so myself it's pretty good and definately not bad for my 1st attempt at getting published. I'm sharing it here because I'm proud of it and I think it's something a few ppl might identify with in some manner. If you don't identify trust me I do understand and won't be offended.
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JacJac, I think it is a very good attempt at publishing. I am presuming you are contemplating, if not already working on, a second part from your statement that part 2 is more steamy. If so, you are going to have to share that one too. Best of luck on your publishing endeavors. Maybe you can be a part of that book of DS stories they are thinking about in that other thread. That would be something great. :)
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