Hi, mine name is Wilma, and writing …
Hi, mine name is Wilma, and writing in here to see if anyone else can give me advice on how to deal with losing my …
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daddyslittlegirl90 
12:11pm, November 11, 2009
a long day!!!
a long day of misery,
a long day of pain,
a long day of heartache,
things will never be the same,
a long day of questions,
a long day with no answers,
a long day of whatevers,
damn i ran out of chances,
a long day trying to make things right,
a long day trying to get through,
a long day trying to make things better,
trying to work out what the hell to do,
a long day thinking things over,
a long day of thoughts in my head,
a long day of whispering to myself,
trying to work out what was said,
a long day of agony,
a long day of despair,
a long day of patronising,
why cant they see i care,
a long day of anger,
a long day fear,
a long day of upset,
coz my daddy isnt here
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This is beautiful, you are so darned good at poems. A Very Deep Lasting Meaning. LOL
LeeAnn
YES SWEETY,U WRITE SUCH BEAUTIFUL POEMS FROM YOUR LOVE U LOTS MY LITTLE SIS,HUGS,ANN
msa160
i know you miss our dad sweetie. As time goes on he pain wil lesse. That was a beautiful poem written from the heart. i wish that I could express my feelings into the words like you. Love you sweetie. BIG HUGS...MARIE
MJP
what a great poem....you are so talented. I know how you feel about your dad....I miss my dad also.... I can feel my feelings in ur poem
Morgaine71
wow you sure do have a great deal of talent in the poetry department.Im sure many,many.many others as well. i still miss my Dad every day and it's been since 1999.The pain never goes away but it definitely begins to subside after a while.I can feel the pain in your words and i am with you there.keep up your poetry b/c you have soooooo much talent.take care hun.
Lola694
You really are talented. I know how much you miss your Dad. :0)
bb4
Sweetheart, your really talented. I really love your work. *hugs* I'm here if you ever need to talk.
RabbitAnn11
great poem, but sad circumstances hon, I feel your pain, but keep writing xxx )))) love you x
AngelAfriel
i know how much you miss your dad kitty ,as i still do mine ,but you and he shared a special bond that can never be broken ,and i know he will always be looking over you and be so proud of all you do and all you are.thinking of you with love ,yours friend always sharon xxoxoxo
Rocky7
You are so talented! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!
cjcam
I love it to. Its beautiful and it has a very good structure xxx
annie101
that was very good. i feel ur kind of pain everyday but i think we can get thru it all
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