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KrusH 
7:21pm Monday
Play your harp little Angel
But it cant help you at all
You're about to find out the pains of earth
When heaven gives out, prepare for the fall
Play your harp little Angel
But it wont help you in the least
What will you do to save yourself
When even music can not tame the beast
Play your harp little Angel
But its hard when the beast is upon you
Your wings broken and your harp shattered
So now what shall you do?
You can no longer play your harp little Angel
And your wings cannot fly
Stare up with tears in your perfect eyes
You fall to your knees and pray for relief,
But an angel never dies
But it cant help you at all
You're about to find out the pains of earth
When heaven gives out, prepare for the fall
Play your harp little Angel
But it wont help you in the least
What will you do to save yourself
When even music can not tame the beast
Play your harp little Angel
But its hard when the beast is upon you
Your wings broken and your harp shattered
So now what shall you do?
You can no longer play your harp little Angel
And your wings cannot fly
Stare up with tears in your perfect eyes
You fall to your knees and pray for relief,
But an angel never dies
Comments
Well, you already know what I think about this poem, but I am leaving a comment in high hopes that you will smile :D I still like the poem, and I really like how, like a lot of your writing, it puts images in my head, and I think that is very cool. :D You're still my hero. :D
InsomniacM
Beautifully done, as you usually do ;) beautiful poem, beautiful images
pixie303
I came across this just now and I just wanted to comment and say that you are a great poet. I love this poem.
BlackWingedAngelxox
Hm. Well you know me and how I dont usually lie to spare people feelings unless I feel like they'll just bitch and moan or just be really annoying if i tell them what i actually think, so yes. I don't like this one. But I did read it, and you said I never comment, so this is me commenting with alll honesty.
mwah!
HONESTYis