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KrusH 
7:21pm November 16
This is s poem im working on, this is draft one. any input would be apreciated :)
She is the nicest girl you will ever meet
But you will never know her name
You would never even talk to her
Because she seemed far too plain
She stood with a heart as bright as the sun
But exclusion and isolation clouded her soul
You could have picked her up and cleared her skies
But you laughed and heckled her, forcing her deeper in that hole
Her clothes may not fit
Her hair may not be done
She doesnt wear makeup
and she may hate the sun
Her apearance is mild
So you may overlook
You never cared about what was inside
You would never even open the book
Fit yourself in the group
Mock the scars that climb her arm
She may have made them bleed
But you caused the real harm
She was the nicest girl you would ever meet
But you will never see her again
She may well have lasted longer
If you had looked inside and called her friend
Comments
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ExotisDiligo
OMG LIKE WOW THATS BEAUTIFUL..................AWW I LOVE IT
AOR
it's beautiful, really good
MightyMouse
Wow that's really good.
Wabby
omg thats so great...Its really moving. I love it!
Megan4955
Thats amazing.
missingabrother
I love it, you are a great writer
kristalynn1305
who's that about?
HONESTYis
omg that is so good ur like so great at writing i soooooooo love it
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