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lovewins
Male, 28, bronx, NY
"fuckin fed up with life"
10:33am, November 15, 2009
they hate i play Mood
Monday, December 1, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

we talk and gossip alot

how much we got

we brag to the point of no mercy

a little money makes us greedy

we ask god for forgiveness

but  we hold on to negative seeds

disabled and the poor suffer

and all u say u need a lover

we need to be thankful or lose our faith

i meditate pray to end my tormented shame

wish the world could change

but if money brings u love

then i am just gotta let u indulge in ur lust

they will hate i will play

the positivity game til i hit the grave

 

 

 

 

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Comments

  1. ineedhelpnow

    amen to that


    ineedhelpnow

  2. needinsight

    beutiful. thank you for sharing your spirit.


    needinsight

  3. Lillian74

    it sounds like the lyrics to a rap song. yeah,umm


    Lillian74

  4. JaneDoll

    Hey lovewins, :)

    Many prayers are like wisps in the wind
    Born of greed that has no end,

    Until life ends, unexpected.


    JaneDoll

  5. motherlesschild

    Once again,you did good,very good.Keep it up,it makes for very good reading!!


    motherlesschild

  6. redsilverfox

    Sounds great and keep on writing so how is school going?


    redsilverfox

  7. rcjneon

    Interesting! I enjoyed it! By all means, keep writing.


    rcjneon

  8. vivienne9443

    I need that thank u.I love your Poem.Big hug lots of love viv


    vivienne9443

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