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lovewins
Male, 28, bronx, NY
"hanging in there by the grace of god:computer broke down will be getting it soon"
11:35am
care to listen to me Mood
Thursday, August 21, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

i see dreams but i rather be present with me

i pay more attention

to you than to me

but i get bored with apprehension

than i turn to read

maybe my ipod will help me breathe

yes god loves me

i am you in many ways

let me stop trying to gaze

at the place where i see people go insane

cuz i too go a bit insane

livin in a world of pain

still i see lover's reign

park full of kids today

makin love still makes the affection rain

yes i am not all perfect

the beauty is in the purpose

live to live with flaws

enjoy lust and never lose your awes

belief is god with no sight

but faith to guide the eyes

when no one is in the light

you see past the hype

i am in love with love

i dream of every star above

to kiss and hug

a beautiful lover with a sensual touch

to be alive in my class

to let alll the kids laugh

to let love kill wrath

RATE THIS ENTRY:
Inspirational
Moving
Helpful
Creative

Comments

  1. LovelyNiecy

    I LOVE YOUR WRITINGS!
    TRY TO GET THEM PUBLISHED. THEY ARE YOUR GIFT. YOU HAVE A BEAUTIFUL GIFT OF POETRY FROM GOD. IM SO HAPPY THAT YOU USE IT AND THAT YOU SHARE IT WITH OTHERS.
    LOT'S OF WARM HUGS,
    NIECY


    LovelyNiecy

  2. poetryangel

    that was awesome u did a wonderful job, please keep writting u r so great at it, like it comes natural to u. i am so proud of u. hope u have a good day...i am here if u need to talk..


    poetryangel

  3. ariesc8942

    Since this is of all the first poems I read of yours. I like this poem indeed. It inspirational and well written. Keep writing its wonderful.


    ariesc8942

  4. fragileteacup

    You are amazing. You have so much depth. Good luck to you my friend.


    fragileteacup

  5. Moonshowers

    That is lovely.


    Moonshowers

  6. ChristinaLynn

    that was deep :)


    ChristinaLynn

  7. slippedaway

    i like this. huge into writing, so i definately appreciate it.


    slippedaway

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