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Mirniy 
1:20pm, June 21, 2009
footsteps in the hallway...
footsteps in the hallway
getting closer
sound of boots
key in the lock
shackles on my wrists
pain
footsteps in the hallway
getting closer
voices shouting
faces towering over me
holding me down
pain
footsteps in the hallway
getting closer
sound of boots
my body broken
fear followed by pain
pain
Comments
Very haunting and powerful.
Desertdancer
May the pain in your poem lessen the pain that you feel. May the beauty of your writing conquer the ugliness of your past experience.May each memory that you write in verse take away a nightmare from your nights.
Is this a bad anniversary for you? Whatever reason that you hate November for I send you my sympathy and my good thoughts for healing to you.
Hannah52
Can imagine how horrible it was. Nothing worse than waiting, and hearing every sound, and fear when you hear sounds and knowing what will happen.
Hope that writing this helped you and not made you to hurt more.
calmsee
that is very emotional... i can feel it. im so sorry i cant take away your pain
masochistickiss
pain, I was told that pain is weakness leaving the body, that's a bunch of bull. I have also been told pain is what lets us know we are still alive. I would like to be alive without pain, just to see what it's like. Stay strong Birdie. Hugs.
Mrjosua
I think my heart dropped into the pit of my stomach... I hope you can find peace with the powerful words you have written. Grant
TryingtoCope7
Back when I first stated dealing with my emotional pain, I wrote in poems to. Wonderful way to get it out. Wonderful poem by the way. Hope you are feeling better.
ZAZAS
I could almost hear them marching with your words...powerful.
ZAZAS
Pretty sweet. Very moving, very sudden.
30pieces
Scary...makes my heart race just reading it.
TLCDaisy