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butterflyzrfree
Female, 51, Miami, FL
"When they discover the center of the universe, a lot of people will be disappointed to discover they are not it. - Bernard Bailey"
4:09am, July 20, 2009
Lie in Wait Mood
Wednesday, January 14, 2009 | A Poem/Artistic story

  

 Lie in wait

 Don't tell anyone the plan

 Remember the plan we discussed

 one gray day last year?

That the Chinese have in their book of war

A good plan.

 

Patience is critical.

Feel the moment, grab your weapon-Attack!

Know your weapon

You are a hero in your family.

Nothing costs anything 

But Human Loss.

 

See the Red beforehand.

The color of anger, power, absolute strength, mutilation

Life is good.

 

We have them in gunsite.

Take aim-aim is critical.

Don't think, ruminate, reflect, or remember.

Lie in wait -then attack.

 

Patience is crucial

Never shake-it feeds the fear.

Remember the plan

The plan is critical

Red is good

 

Shaking feeds fear

Nothing costs anything

Don't remember

Aim the gun.

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Comments

  1. ABrow

    i like this one. it jumps between paragrphs which is semi suspense. i like it a lot. really like the first line of the last paragraph.


    ABrow

  2. wardman

    Gail,

    This is absolutely beautiful. You have a clear talent. Thank you for sharing your gift with me.


    wardman

  3. butterflyzrfree

    Thanks Wardman and ABrow! I appreciate the positive encouragement! I will post a couple more poems now on the journal here, and then go to Xanadu with one of them! :-)


    butterflyzrfree

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