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chichiguita
Female, 40, In a world that needs more dancin, shes a hula girl at heart, IN
"Breathe in, breathe out, move on"
1:39pm, October 19, 2008
Snails Mood
Tuesday, November 18, 2008 | A Poem/Artistic story

We are all like snails here

Wandering--with purpose

loping about--dragging out lives along

working and plodding to PAY

a cancelled debt. 

 

 

We want "much"--with all the trimmings

and we want--until Dove says that

"excess hardens on us like a shell"

 

"More" is our anthem--our sworn duty--allegiance pledged

The fit survive such things, I'm told

and still--I have to wonder

 

Can a snail survive without its shell?

whithout a house of wood to hold its big-screen soul?

What happens to that tiny thing

When "much" is taken

Seperated--like bone from marrow

--armor broken--does it shiver there?

Left naked--on the alter bare--like an sacrifice

 

--or does it dance

to feel the wind upon its face?

--the Son to blind it's eye from all that is so necessary

 

Once taken from its slimy home

Exposed--its sure to dry

In unprotected presence of the Son

to shrivel up and die

--or will it fly?

 

Can a snail survive without its shell--can I?

 

And still I go on wondering

about those things with feathers

that perch and sing and have no nest

Its crazy--isn't it?

Like a fox--without a hole to rest.

 

 

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